Using disciplinary conventions
Although academic writing conventions are common to most disciplines, the way they are applied may differ. For example, some social sciences may require a full disclosure of a researcher’s paradigmatic alignment and its implications for their research, while other disciplines may put more emphasis on detailing the research procedure. Look at examples from your discipline and check with your supervisors if you have questions.
Reflect on the thesis core
Study an example thesis to observe how the author framed the research question or hypothesis, justified the research methods, analysed data, reported results and synthesised and discussed findings. Then, look at your own writing or plan for these parts.
Answer the following questions for both the example thesis and your own to help you reflect on how you are using disciplinary conventions in shaping your own thesis narrative.
1. Is the research question feasible, interesting, novel, ethical and relevant (the FINER criteria)?
2. Is the hypothesis disprovable, clear and specific? Can you identify the key variables in the hypothesis?
3. Is the question or hypothesis properly contextualised and justified?
4. What research methods does the thesis use? Are they conventional or novel in the discipline? How are they justified?
5. What measurements and/or thresholds have been established for the data collection and/or analysis? What are these measurements and thresholds based on?
6. Has a clear trail of methods been laid out to allow a reader to follow and/or replicate the research?
7. What new knowledge does each of the data/results chapters add?
8. What new insight, theory or solution does the discussion section of the thesis present? What’s the key argument and evidence for this claim to knowledge? Is this argument valid?
9. Is there a clear line of reasoning that leads from the research question/hypothesis to the methods, data analysis/results and discussion? How is the research question being answered?
10. How could you improve this thesis in the above aspects?
Final tip
Together with your research question or hypothesis, your research methods, results, discussion, analysis and synthesis show the reader your own work, which shapes your original contribution. These parts should constitute the bulk of your writing effort throughout your candidature. Use your disciplinary expertise to promote your own innovation, whether in ideas or expression.
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Faeth, I. (2005). Foreign direct investment in Australia: Determinants and consequences [PhD thesis, University of Melbourne]. http://hdl.handle.net/11343/39043
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Mody, F. (2018). Doctors down under: European medical migrants in Victoria (Australia), 1930-60 [PhD thesis, University of Melbourne]. http://hdl.handle.net/11343/221550